Execution Tales - some comments plus asking for feedback
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The posting of Chapter 49 Revision 2 completes Part 2 of Execution Tales
The editing of the text is almost entirely of the tidying up variety. I am also stating where relevant in brackets where the ideas came from when I have adapted something I have come across that interested me. The major change has been the addition of pictures, drawings & images to all the Chapters from my collection which I have pulled together over recent years. Two rules govern my use of these:
1] I try & make them match the Chapter as closely as possible. Where a Chapter is just moving the narrative on I choose pictures etc that I like that reflect that part of the overall narrative
2] I won't use a picture/drawing/image more than once
I prefer the black & white drawings to the colour ones, GIFs & Manips. In my view their starkness & simplicity makes them somehow more evocative
I haven't had much feedback since embarking on the Revision 2 postings so I would be very grateful if those who have been following the repostings would tell me what they think. Please be honest & let me know what you like & what you don't
The editing of the text is almost entirely of the tidying up variety. I am also stating where relevant in brackets where the ideas came from when I have adapted something I have come across that interested me. The major change has been the addition of pictures, drawings & images to all the Chapters from my collection which I have pulled together over recent years. Two rules govern my use of these:
1] I try & make them match the Chapter as closely as possible. Where a Chapter is just moving the narrative on I choose pictures etc that I like that reflect that part of the overall narrative
2] I won't use a picture/drawing/image more than once
I prefer the black & white drawings to the colour ones, GIFs & Manips. In my view their starkness & simplicity makes them somehow more evocative
I haven't had much feedback since embarking on the Revision 2 postings so I would be very grateful if those who have been following the repostings would tell me what they think. Please be honest & let me know what you like & what you don't
Well I love the stories but I would love it if you included a pre execution enema and butt plugs where applicable and shoe removal before being taken to scaffold or chamber and like blindfolds prior tp or always upon arrival at said scaffold or chamber thanks in advance and maybe the nurse kissing the condemened after removing her shoes and leaving her in stockinged feet
Believe it or not I'm too squeamish for butt plugs & enemas. Your other point sounds a bit consensual for me. Terror & agony I prefer
The names Bastard, Sick Bastard
The names Bastard, Sick Bastard
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