A weird revision from [The Scarlet Letter](Co-written by me and AI)
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Hester already knew that two guards entering into her prison cell just before would do to herself. Adultery crime death convict would be totally undressed for getting extreme humiliation before she would be escorted to the execution grounds.

Her eyes took in the dull gray of the prison walls one last time before the guards' rough hands grabbed her arms and led her out into the cool, damp air of the early morning. The streets of Boston were eerily silent as they made their way to the town square, the cobblestones slick with the dew of the night's rain. The weight of the scarlet letter "A" around her neck was a constant reminder of her impending fate. All of Hester's bare skin was exposed to all passers-by, who sent her disgusted glances and whispered curses as she walked by. Hester felt the cold metal bite into her skin as the guards secured her hands behind her back with ropes, leaving her utterly vulnerable. The stench of fear and despair clung to her as they approached the gallows.

SUMMARY^1: Two guards strip Hester of her clothing in her cell, and lead her through the silent streets of Boston to the town square for her execution. The scarlet letter "A" hangs around her neck as a symbol of her adultery. The townspeople look at her with disgust. She is bound at the gallows, feeling the coldness of the metal and the ropes around her wrists, as she prepares to face her punishment.

The wooden structure loomed over her, tall and ominous, the noose already in place, swinging gently in the breeze. The town's people had started to gather, their eyes greedy for the sight of her disgrace. The sky above was a mix of purple and red, the sun not yet risen to bear witness to the grim spectacle about to unfold. As they reached the platform, one of the guards shoved her forward, forcing her to climb the rickety stairs. Each step she took sent a shiver down her spine, the wood creaking under her bare feet. At the top, she was pushed onto the cold, damp planks, the noose waiting like a snake ready to strike.

Before the executioner laid the noose around her neck, reverend Dimmesdale approached Hester to "recommend" her to confess her daughter Pearl's father, but she remained steadfast in her silence. His eyes bore into hers, desperate for a revelation that would ease his own tortured conscience, but she stared back with a fierce determination that spoke volumes without uttering a single word. The crowd grew restless, whispering and pointing as the sun peeked over the horizon, casting long shadows across the square.

SUMMARY^1: Hester is led to the gallows in the town square, surrounded by a gathering crowd. The execution is set to take place as the sun rises. Reverend Dimmesdale tries to persuade Hester to reveal the father of her child, Pearl, but she remains silent, maintaining her dignity despite the fear and anticipation of death.

As soon as the executioner laid the noose around her neck, he kicked the stool from under her feet without any ceremony. Hester's body jerked as the rope tightened, cutting into her throat and choking the air from her lungs. She swung there, naked and exposed, the scarlet letter stark against her pale flesh. The crowd below jeered and spat, their eyes glinting with a perverse delight in her suffering.

Hester's gorgeous bare breasts, at the end of which two pink cute nipples was fully erected by the cold air, heaved as she struggled against the noose. Her slim and straight-stretched long bare legs kicked the empty air below, searching for something to hold onto, anything that could ease the relentless pressure on her throat. But there was nothing. Only the unforgiving wood of the gallows and the leering faces of the townsfolk, their eyes feasting on her agony. The scarlet letter "A" stood out against her alabaster skin like a beacon of infamy, a symbol of the sin she bore alone.

SUMMARY^1: The executioner places the noose around Hester's neck and she is hanged in public. Her body is displayed naked as the crowd watches, showing clear signs of pain and distress. The scarlet letter "A" remains prominent, marking her as an adulterer for all to see.

The noose grew tighter around Hester's neck, her face turning a deep shade of purple. Her eyes bulged as she desperately sought any glimpse of kindness or mercy in the sea of judgmental faces. Her toes pointed, trying to find purchase on the nothingness beneath her, but there was no escape from the relentless squeeze of the rope. The executioner, a burly man with a sadistic smile, pulled the rope taut, ensuring her suffering was prolonged. The crowd's chant grew louder, a cacophony of anger and disgust that echoed through the square.

Roger Chillingwarth, who was Hester's husband and had agreed to execute her, watched the gruesome sight with a mix of triumph and disgust. His cold, calculating gaze was unwavering as he observed her slow and painful death, the very embodiment of the town's righteous anger. Yet even in the throes of death, Hester's spirit remained unbroken. Her eyes, though filled with pain, never lost their dignity, never pleaded for the mercy that was not offered.

Hester's body swung back and forth, a macabre dance to the rhythm of her fading life. The muscles in her neck strained against the noose, desperately seeking freedom that was no longer within reach. Her legs twitched and kicked, toes curling and uncurling, as if still trying to flee from the fate she had been sentenced to. The scarlet letter, now saturated with sweat and tears, stuck to her skin, becoming one with the very essence of her being.

SUMMARY^1: Hester is hanged by the neck, her body contorting in pain, while the townspeople watch with malicious pleasure. Her husband, Roger Chillingwarth, who is also her executioner, observes her agonizing death with a mix of satisfaction and revulsion. Despite the torture, Hester's spirit holds strong, and the scarlet letter becomes a part of her very essence.

Her breathing grew shallower, the noose digging deeper into her neck with each painful gasp. Her tongue protruded slightly from her mouth, a dark purple tinge creeping across her face as the blood vessels in her head began to burst. The crowd below watched with a mix of horror and fascination, their own breaths held in anticipation of the moment when her body would finally still.

And then it came. With a final, desperate twitch, Hester's legs fell limp, her body going slack. The fight for life drained from her eyes, leaving them glazed and lifeless. The only sound that filled the air now was the creak of the wooden gallows and the soft thud of her body swaying in the early morning breeze. The crowd's cries of triumph and disgust had turned to an eerie silence, a tacit acknowledgment that the spectacle was over.

Hester's still clear blue eyes stared vacantly into the heavens, no longer seeing the town she had called home, no longer feeling the pain that had engulfed her. The noose had done its job, leaving an angry red ring around her slim and delicate neck, a grim reminder of the town's wrath. Her once vibrant hair hung in lifeless strands around her face, now a dull brown from the months of hardship and lack of care.

Hester's still gorgeous breasts, now devoid of life, hung heavily, the pink tips of her nipples standing starkly against the paleness of her skin. Her long, slender arms were bound tightly behind her, the skin bruised and raw from the rough treatment of the guards. Her hands, once skilled in the art of needlework, now hung limp and still, fingers slightly curled as if clutching at invisible threads of hope that had been torn away. Her stomach, once rounded with the life of her daughter, was now flat and lifeless, the muscles relaxed in their final rest. Her still ample hips and thighs, once the site of passionate whispers and tender touches, now swung slightly with the movement of her body in the breeze. Her slim and long legs, which had borne the weight of her many journeys through life, were now just cold and lifelessly slack limbs, marred by the rope burns around her ankles. Warm-looking pee dripped along the smooth bare skin of her legs, the last sign of life leaving her body.

Roger Chillingwarth approached the gallows, and watched Hester's dead naked body. He yelled, "Let this be a warning to all who dare to defy the sanctity of marriage!" The townsfolk murmured their agreement, their eyes never leaving the grisly sight above them. The executioner descended the stairs, leaving the body of Hester to hang as a gruesome reminder of the consequences of adultery. The rope creaked and strained, bearing the weight of Hester's lifeless form, swaying slightly in the breeze.

SUMMARY^1: After her execution, Hester's naked body is displayed, showcasing the marks of her suffering. Her beautiful features, once filled with life, are now cold and still. Chillingwarth addresses the town, using her corpse as a grim deterrent for future transgressions, and the executioner leaves her hanging as a permanent, gruesome reminder of the price of adultery.

From the day, Hester's naked corpse, which was being still hung by the neck on the noose of the gallows, at which she had received hanging execution, became a gruesome display at the main square of Boston. Most of passers-by, especially in the daytime, gave scornful and disgusted looks at her lifeless body, some even spat at the scarlet letter 'A' which was a symbol of her adultery. But as nightfall came, other kind of men approached her.

Some night, two or three young men climbed the gallows. They had heard whispers of Hester's beauty, of the fiery spirit that had driven her to commit the ultimate sin. Their eyes roved over her lifeless form, tracing the curves of her hips and the fullness of her breasts. One of them reached out and touched her, his hand trembling with a mix of excitement and fear. His fingertips brushed the soft skin of her thigh, leaving a trail of warmth in the cold night air. Amd another man stretched his right hand to her cute pink nipples, which were still erect and firm even in death. He pinched and twisted them roughly, feeling a perverse thrill at the sensation.
"Look at her, she's still got it," one of them jeered, leering at the lifeless body.
"Yeah, she's a fine piece," another responded, licking his lips as he stepped closer.
The third man, bolder than the rest, reached between her legs. He felt the softness of her pubic hair, a stark contrast to the roughness of his own hand. He pushed his fingers into her, feeling the coldness of her insides. His friends watched with rapt attention, their own desires growing as they saw the evidence of his violation.

Their laughter grew louder, echoing through the deserted square. They took turns with her body, each one claiming a piece of her for themselves, their hands exploring and desecrating her in the dark. They pulled and poked, their breath coming in quick, ragged gasps as they played out their sick fantasies. If Hester had been still alive, she would have rejected these men with disgust. But she had already died by receiving hanging execution, so her naked corpse could not reject all of such disgusting touching.
Because the townsfolk administration and her husband Roger Chillingwarth continuesly rejected taking down her corpse, Hester's naked corpse was continuously being displayed like that, as the object of contempt in daytime, and as of obscene desire in nighttime.

In 5 years after, a 5-year-old young girl, with the woman nurturing her, was passing the main square. In her gaze, Hester's naked corpse, being still hung by the neck on the noose, came into.
Pearl asked, "What is that? Who is she? Why is she there?"
Pearl's nanny was astonished, but she thought that saying the gruesome truth was no good to her. "She's a sad story, Pearl. A woman who made a big mistake and now everyone can see it," she replied, trying to keep her voice steady.
Pearl stared at the corpse, the scarlet letter "A" still stark against the bare skin of the chest. Pearl felt that the naked corpse was unknowingly attractive, though she was already died and such grousomely displayed. "What was her mistake?" she asked innocently.
"She did something very wrong, and now she's a reminder to everyone else not to do it," the nanny said, hoping that would be enough.
But Pearl's curiosity was not satisfied. "What did she do?" she insisted.
The nanny sighed heavily, "She had a baby without a husband, and that's not allowed in our town. That's why she's wearing that big red letter and hanging there."
Pearl looked up at her with confusion and a hint of fear in her eyes. "But, I don't have a daddy, does that mean I'm wrong too?"
The nanny's heart clenched, but she forced a smile. "No, Pearl, you're not wrong. Sometimes things happen that people don't understand. But you are loved, and that's all that matters."

Pearl nodded, but she couldn't take her eyes off the corpse. She saw the bruised and swollen face, the lifeless arms and legs, and the rope that had taken her mother's life. She felt a strange mix of sadness and anger, but she didn't understand why. As they walked away, Pearl couldn't help but look back at the gallows, the image of the female death convict's naked body etched into her mind.

Years passed, and Pearl grew into a beautiful young woman, much like her mother before her. But she bore the same fiery spirit that had led Hester to her fate. Despite the whispers and the pointing fingers, Pearl remained strong, her mother's silent sacrifice a beacon of strength within her. She grew to be wild and free, a stark contrast to the oppressive society that had taken so much from them both.

Some day, when Pearl was going through the main square, she came to see again Hester's naked corpse, being still hung on the noose of the gallows. On Pearl's gaze, Hester's naked body was still beautiful and attractive. Then, somebody yelled to Pearl. "Look, the spawn of the adulteress! How fitting she's just like her mother!"
Pearl's cheeks burned with shame and anger, but she didn't run away. Instead, she marched up to the man, her eyes flashing with the same defiance that had once burned in Hester's.
"What do you know of my mother?" she demanded, her voice shaking with emotion.
The man sneered, "Only what everyone knows. That obscene naked corpse is your mother!"
Pearl's eyes filled with tears, but she didn't let them fall. She turned away from the man and faced the gallows, her gaze fixed on Hester's lifeless form. "My mother was a strong woman," she said firmly. "And I will not let you or anyone else tarnish her memory."

Next day, Pearl visited the townsfolk administration, and requested to bury Hester's corpse. But the town officials, still carrying the flame of anger and judgment, rejected her plea. They claimed that Hester's corpse was to remain a public spectacle as a warning to all who would dare to commit adultery. The scarlet letter "A" was a grim symbol of the town's unforgiving moral code, and her naked body a stark reminder of the consequences of transgressing it.

Pearl's determination grew with each rejection. She knew that she had to take matters into her own hands if she wanted to give her mother a proper burial. That night, under the cover of darkness, she approached the gallows with a knife and a rope ladder. Her heart pounded in her chest as she scaled the rickety structure, her eyes never leaving the lifeless form of the woman who had given her life.

As she reached the top, the wind picked up, causing the corpse to swing slightly. The cold metal of the knife in her hand felt like a lifeline, the only thing standing between her and the injustice that had been done. With trembling hands, she began to cut through the thick rope that held Hester's body. The blade was sharp, slicing through the fibers with surprising ease, and with each inch that fell away, Pearl felt a weight lifting from her shoulders.

The townsfolk had grown complacent in their vigilance over the years, the shock of Hester's public hanging fading into a macabre backdrop to their daily lives. But Pearl had not forgotten, and she knew that the time had come to claim what was rightfully hers. The last strand of rope fell away, and Hester's body dropped with a sickening thud to the ground below. Pearl's heart lurched at the sound, but she steeled herself and climbed down, her eyes never leaving the lifeless form of her mother.

Her hands trembled as she cradled Hester's head, the noose still tight around her neck, the scarlet letter "A" still glaring in the moonlight. Carefully, she untied the knot that had held her mother's spirit hostage for so long. The rope fell away, and Pearl felt a strange sense of relief wash over her. It was as if she had finally set her mother free from the town's cruel judgment.

With great effort, Pearl managed to lower the corpse to the ground, her muscles straining under the weight. She had brought a soft blanket to cover her mother's nakedness, a small act of dignity in the face of such a public display of degradation. The fabric whispered against the cold, hard cobblestones as she laid it over Hester's lifeless form.

Her eyes filled with tears as she gazed upon the bruised and decayed body that had once been so full of life and passion. But even in death, the contours of Hester's naked body remained breathtakingly beautiful, a silent testament to the woman she had been. Pearl's hands moved gently over the bruises and the rope marks, feeling the cold, unyielding flesh beneath her fingertips.

However, unfortunately, Pearl had not been as stealthy as she had thought. The guards had been alerted by the sudden movement at the gallows, and they rushed to the scene, torches in hand. They found Pearl kneeling beside her mother's corpse, the knife still in her hand, the scarlet letter "A" lying discarded on the ground.

"What have you done, girl?" one of the guards bellowed, his voice filled with outrage.
Pearl stood up, her eyes blazing with a fierce determination that mirrored her mother's. "I've come to claim my mother," she said, her voice firm and unwavering. "To give her the burial she deserves, away from this place of shame."
The guards advanced on her, their expressions a mix of shock and disgust. "You're as wicked as she was," another spat grabbed tightly her. They drafted Pearl to the prison.

In the cold, damp cell, Pearl was left alone with her thoughts, the weight of her actions settling heavily upon her. She had defied the town, and now she would face their wrath. But as she sat there, she couldn't help but feel a sense of pride. She had done what no one else had dared to do: stand up to the town's hypocrisy and demand justice for her mother.

Next day, after hanging Hester's naked corpse again at the noose of the gallows, the townsfolk administration opened Pearl's trial. They accused Pearl as the treason crime, so sentenced her same penalty as her mother's: hanging execution.
Pearl's eyes showed any fear when she heard her horrible sentence. When the judges permitted her some requests, she said. "Execute me, in totally same way as my mother's, at the next of my mother's corpse, and also display my naked corpse in the same way."

The townsfolk were shocked by her words, but the judge, an old man with a stern face, nodded gravely. "So be it," he intoned, his voice echoing through the small, dimly lit courtroom. "The apple does not fall far from the tree."
The guards took Pearl away, her fate sealed. She knew that she would soon join her mother in a grisly display of the town's justice.

At noon in the next day, the chair beneath Pearl's cute bare feet was kicked by the executioner, who executed her mother 18 years ago. Pearl's slim and long legs kicked in the air as the noose around her neck tightened, her toes pointed in a desperate search for escape that would never come. Pearl's a little more gorgeous breasts than her mother Hester's, at the end of which two hard and cute pink nipples stood out even more in the cold air, bobbed up and down with the motion of her dying naked body. But on Pearl's beautiful face, there was no fear, only anger and defiance. The townsfolk had gathered again in the square, eager to see the end of the line that had begun with Hester's transgression. Most of them gave the same scornful looks they had reserved for her mother all those years ago, but some couldn't help but feel a twinge of pity for the young girl who had been born into a world of scorn and now faced the same grim fate.

Finally, Pearl's fatal moment came. With a sharp and short scream, Pearl's head collapsed sideways. Her slim naked body having sensual figure, after last twitching, lost all its strength and started being slowly swayed. Pearl's still clear blue eyes, even though she already died, still stared into the crowd with a fiery defiance. Her long, dark hair, once full of life and vigor, now hung around her face like a mournful veil, framing the black letter "T," which was the first letter of her accused crime.

Pearl's gorgeous breasts, at the end of which two hard and cute pink nipples stood out even more in the cold air, stopped heaving after a few moments. Her hands, which had been clenched into fists of rebellion, now hung limp and still, the fingers slightly curled as if they were clutching at the very air that had been choked from her. Her ample hips same as that of her mother Hester, once the site of passionate whispers and tender touches, now swung slightly with the motion of her lifeless body. Her slim and straight-stretched legs, along which her last pee had flown down to the ground, now just cold and lifeless limbs. Her cute feet was floating in the air, toes curled as if in protest to the treatment she had received from the town she had called home.

According to the sentence and her last request, Pearl's naked corpse was displayed alongside her mother's, a double warning to the town of Boston of the fate that awaited those who dared to challenge their rigid moral code. The black "T" hung around her neck, a stark reminder of her treasonous act of compassion. And also, the objects of contempt in daytime and obscene death in nighttime were doubled.
Some night, the sons of the same young men who had desecrated Hester's corpse gathered around the gallows, looking at the two naked female bodies with a mix of awe and revulsion. They had heard the tales of the mother and daughter, of their fiery spirits and the sins that had led to their deaths. The young men spoke in hushed whispers, their eyes tracing the curves of the bodies before them, their desires a disturbing echo of their fathers'.
"Now, here are two whores! The apple doesn't fall far from the tree indeed," one of the men spat, his voice thick with lust.
The others nodded in agreement, their eyes greedily devouring the sight of the two women, bound together in death as they had never been in life. They approached the gallows, their hands reaching out to touch the cold, lifeless flesh. The "new" corpse was more "popular." "Wow, she is still a virgin!" one of them said, as he touched Pearl's cold, tight pussy, which had never been penetrated by any male organ. When somebody touched Pearl's still gorgeous breasts, another one touched her mother's still straight-stretched long bare legs. "Looks like she was a good lay, even in death," another man said, his voice low and hungry.

But, in spite of such continous harsh dealing, Pearl's naked corpse, surprisingly, was not harmed or rotten. It remained almost fresh, as if defying the natural cycle of decay. In addition, on her mother's Hester's naked corpse, the harmed trace became slowly disappeared. They were becoming something more than a mere display of justice. Some townsfolk whispered about witchcraft, others about divine intervention. The sight of the two naked bodies, hanging side by side with their scarlet and black letters, became a macabre attraction, drawing curious and fearful gazes from those who dared to pass by.
"It's as if they're alive," a young girl whispered to her friend as they walked by the gallows one morning, their eyes wide with horror and fascination.
"Don't be ridiculous," her friend scoffed, but she couldn't deny the unsettling feeling that the lifeless forms seemed to be watching them.

The years went on, and the town of Boston grew and changed. New generations were born, and the story of Hester and Pearl became a legend, a cautionary tale of passion and rebellion. The gallows, displaying Hester and Pearl's naked corpse by hanging their each neck on the noose, stood tall and strong, a silent sentinel over the town's moral code. And yet, there were whispers of change in the air. Some spoke of a world beyond their narrow streets, a world where people were not judged so harshly for their sins. Maybe, in a day after more years, the mother and daughter could be buried somewhere..


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